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Your Dream Is Dead

They all gathered 'round some tittered others smiled The chesty one with the long legs glared, Nothing can be more inconsiderate than to be told "no" Your dream is dead 8/1/'13

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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 8/14/2013 7:47:00 AM
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sorry for the double comment.... LINDA
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Date: 8/14/2013 7:45:00 AM
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sounds to me as if some peeps can handle being turned down. It's life... all I have to say, when one dream is dead.. search for another... I think this write needs more, and can do without the word tittered... who uses that word anyways... Gabe, this is more like a thought... thank you for sharing the emotions of the heart.... LINDA
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Gabe Shelly
Date: 8/14/2013 3:41:00 PM
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You're right. It is a thought. gabe
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Date: 8/14/2013 7:44:00 AM
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sounds to me as if some peeps can handle being turned down. It's life... all I have to say, when one dream is dead.. search for another... I think this write needs more, and can do without the word tittered... who uses that word anyways... Gabe, this is more like a thought... thank you for sharing the emotions of the heart.... LINDA
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