Your Brown Eyes Flecked With Gold
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I've always Adored "The Shadow of Your Smile" so here is the version I like best by Tony Bennet.
I tried to use the same number of syllables and meter in my new version of this song: Your Brown Eyes Flecked with Gold."

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQS_NyR7qqM *as sung by Tony Bennet
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDhJCExp7tI (as sung by Connie Francis)
One winter’s day we walked in snow
as twilight kissed the sky.
And though it was so long ago
I still try not to cry.
I think about the way that you looked;
that image of you I hold
inside my mind until this day -
Those brown eyes flecked with gold. . .
Your brown eyes flecked with gold
so warmed my heart
I never could have thought
we’d ever part.
How I pray that you
still think of me
anywhere that you,
my love, might be.
Upon your face I wish
once more to gaze -
To see your eyes that shine
like summer days!
I’ll recall when times grow cold
how I felt that day we strolled,
and I never can forget
your brown eyes flecked with gold.
First posted 4/20/16
For John Hamilton's Write a love song Poetry Contest
Based on the song "The Shadow of Your Smile"
LYrics (as sung by Tony Bennet:
One day we walked along the sand
One day in early spring
You held a piper in your hand
To mend its broken wing
Now I'll remember many a day
And many a lonely mile
The echo of a piper's song
The shadow of a smile
The shadow of your smile
When you are gone
Will color all my dreams
And light the dawn
Look into my eyes
My love and see
All the lovely things
You are to me
Our wistful little star
Was far too high
A teardrop kissed your lips
And so did I
Now when I remember spring
All the joy that love can bring
I will be remembering
The shadow of your smile
Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2016
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