Your Breath On My Ear

your breath
touching the hollow 
of my ear
I too am ready
for other things
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 7, 2012 at 6:17 PM
A romantic write, Charles. I enjoyed tonight. Happy Easter to you and your family, Rhonda
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April 7, 2012 at 5:07 PM
this is a good write Charles I appreciate your critique on my haiku although a bit confusing, constructive nonetheless. Thank you for taking the time.. ..Regards..... Joseph
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