Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Your Beauty Touched My Sky

When your beauty touched my sky

the flowers bent my way

engulfing me in a fragrance

that I now know as you

 

The lilac and the lavender

it moved around my soul

bringing comfort to the romance

begging to make our home

 

Wrap your arms around my kindness

let your heart beat soft and free

breathe into the sunshine

in this dance of you and me

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Darlene De Beaulieu April 26, 2018 at 1:39 PM Hello Tim, I enjoyed this rhyme. Have a nice day my friend. I also see this poem as a love poem. Have a nice day my friend.

FJ Thomas March 27, 2018 at 7:01 PM One cannot help but smile at your caressing words Tim :)

Pandita Sietesantos March 23, 2018 at 11:28 AM Dear Tim, I love this charming, romantic piece that comes from the heart of a true lover - so touching and lovely! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2018 at 9:22 AM - So sweet and romantic, Tim :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing March 23, 2018 at 6:32 AM I love the title and absolutely love the poem. Beautifully romantic!!! I fave it!

Jerry T Curtis March 23, 2018 at 6:30 AM You've got the magic Timmy

Lisa Ricci March 23, 2018 at 4:04 AM Good Morning Tim I hope this day finds you well. I very much enjoyed your smooth romantic entry. I found it gentle with imagery.

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly March 22, 2018 at 8:27 PM LOVE-ly words! :)

Chris Green March 22, 2018 at 6:49 PM Beautifully romantic Tim. Nicely done.

Jan Allison March 22, 2018 at 5:07 PM aww so beautiful and romantic a joy to read Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands March 22, 2018 at 4:58 PM Oh, this is perfect Tim. And a favorite too! :)