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Your Beauty

In such soft repose So innocent and so fair Beauty fills my soul In thrills I reach, at last found My love, my soul rests in you

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 9:39:00 PM

John, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:58:00 PM

JOHN, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~

John Squires
Date: 3/23/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Linda for your encouraging words. Hugs to you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2015 9:40:00 PM

John, the lines should not be capitalized and I found line four stilted; however, I loved the way your last line reflects on the word "repose" of the first line. "my soul rests in you" so beautiful. Congrats in my contest.

John Squires
Date: 3/21/2015 10:03:00 PM

Thanks Andrea. It was a new form for me and may have needed more care and time. I appreciate your comments. Bless you.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2015 4:08:00 PM

such tender imagery beautifully penned:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

John Squires
Date: 3/16/2015 5:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan. I appreciate your comment.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/16/2015 2:56:00 PM

super sweet write. I enjoyed it.

John Squires
Date: 3/16/2015 5:23:00 PM

Thank you and many blessings to you.