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Your Beauty

In such soft repose
So innocent and so fair
Beauty fills my soul

In thrills I reach, at last found
My love, my soul rests in you

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Poet Destroyer A

March 29, 2015 at 9:39 PM

John, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

March 22, 2015 at 1:58 PM

JOHN, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~

John Squires

March 23, 2015 at 10:16 AM

Thank you Linda for your encouraging words. Hugs to you my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

March 21, 2015 at 9:40 PM

John, the lines should not be capitalized and I found line four stilted; however, I loved the way your last line reflects on the word "repose" of the first line. "my soul rests in you" so beautiful. Congrats in my contest.

John Squires

March 21, 2015 at 10:03 PM

Thanks Andrea. It was a new form for me and may have needed more care and time. I appreciate your comments. Bless you.