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Your Beauty

May I hold you in my arms May a place a kiss upon your sweet lips May I admire you, and sip you slowly like wine Your love and beauty it sinks into my very soul Your tears, I shall collect like diamonds The man who threw acid in your face One day I shall Kill Kill Kill Kill him 1000 times Except that I can not To do so would diminish your beauty He made the world go blind As I look at you, my eyes can see clearly The most beautiful woman in the world

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Madelin Barton

Date: 5/12/2014 4:58:00 PM

Passionate read Arthur great job hugs Maddie

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/10/2014 9:02:00 PM

sweet angry sweetness. it is emotions like that that poets live for. harsh and loving all wrapped into one cookie. good job again hunny

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/4/2014 7:01:00 PM

Love this one had to revisit it once more, it's very inspirational i would love to write something to along with this one. cheri again love this one

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 4/24/2014 4:14:00 PM

Such a sweet and touching poem :) Ana

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/22/2014 8:49:00 PM

This was a beauty of a poem. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:34:00 PM

Gracious y gracious adios!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/21/2014 4:10:00 AM

You have the soul of a master poet Arthur. Your poem honors and celebrates that fact. This is lovely and reveals a bit of your humble compassionate soul. Bravo!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:35:00 PM

Are you on my payroll? LOL Thank you so much, this is so very kind of you really!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/21/2014 3:47:00 AM

Wow!!! The line like to kill kill kill kill.. Lool I imagine chucky hey you wanna play :) lools.. This a lovely sweet prose... :) you can melt as well as stimulate someone's humor with this one:) claps from olive eloisa :);)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:36:00 PM

I KILL KILL KILL you with hugs to say thanks for these nice words!!!!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 4/20/2014 10:13:00 PM

I admire that you take this very real circumstance and make this woman believe she is still beautiful. Very heart warming... :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:37:00 PM

Hello, thanks again, and this is a very real issue, happening in many countries, something that really saddens me, however true beauty always shines from the inside out!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2014 10:17:00 PM

Well I would say she always was beautiful, when you see the true beauty of someone, they become timeless and ageless, the outside means nothing, for most that's just words, but to feel it in your own heart is true freedom, I know this may seem rare, but once this happens you see the world in a different light!!!!! :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/20/2014 6:46:00 PM

WOW what a lucky women in this write of yours such devotion love the part about collecting her tears like diamonds it inspires my inner heart of the poet to write something. So sorry about the Jelly beans problem I love those things it's like an addiction, almost as bad as m&m's so believe me i can understand. i have not had any this eason either at least yet cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/20/2014 6:50:00 PM

I love jelly beans!!!!!