Your beauty

Beauty is nicely painted on your face
like a rose, neatly plucked from a garden 
and carefully placed in a flower vase,
to spread its sweet fragrance with full pardon.





For contest: Write Four Beautiful Lines
Judged:  3/11/2025 12:37:00 PM
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Placement: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:27 PM
full pardon, haha, congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Famuyiwa Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:54 PM
Thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 3:39 PM
Beautiful indeed, poet.
Famuyiwa Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 11:44 PM
Thanks Andrea.
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