Your Beautiful Soul

My  soft   rosy  petals 

willing to  kiss you

this   morning  bird

sings   with  you

charming   winds

waves   your  red  hair

 your   blue  eyes

meets   MY   sky

for  they  borrow

today and tomorrow

the   colours of  faith

 encompasses  your  breath   

to   learn   more

about   your  soul

The  rivers  ARE

Your  true  friends

For   they  have   always   followed   your  trends !

The  snow  melting  mountains  stands  for  you

 For   you    have   sincerely    adored   them  too..

I   write   my   heart   for  our   passionate  love

The   one   good  life  that   we  both  deserve !

Come   love! Come   love!

 

  copyright 2011  by smriti Jha
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Callus Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 8:21 AM
A beautiful outpouring to the one you love, baring your heart and soul...passion that can even melt the mountain snow, Smriti! How could I have missed this! You speak of romantic emotions with honest truth...no hidden agenda. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Mcdaid Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 10:18 AM
beautifully painted smriti wishing you a blessing of a weekend filled with smiles
Pokhriyal Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:35 AM
Truly Beautiful.................
Rutherford Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:30 AM
There is a kind of reverence in this poem Smriti . Wonderful read . Anne
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 5:51 AM
I am stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry today and I wish to thank you for commenting on my poetry. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with much inspiration Smriti. Love, Carol
Wayne Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 7:21 AM
The rivers ARE Your True friends? What does that signify exactly? Send me a private message you sexy poetess.
Green Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 4:49 PM
whats up my friend, great poem...
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
May 12, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Lovely! Such romance by a poetess. Love the work and diggin' you my friend, good work. Thanks for your very kind words on "Let's Dance" too.
Peranteau Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 4:01 AM
The romance flows well here dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Smriti....much love, james
Fiery Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 8:41 PM
hugs to u
Mehta Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 9:09 AM
I enjoyed the lyricism in the poem with romantic mood, smriti
Zzzzz Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 4:29 AM
Romantic, lyrical and well constructed poem. Thanks for visiting my site and for your kind comments. Regards, Robert.
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