Your Bangles' Symphony

My ears follow your bangles' symphony, with closed eyes I see our sky, rapture in horizon. ===============000===============
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 10:54 AM
purrrrfect, kashi.. sweet congrats on your win..a glory in my eyes! :) huggs!
Prabhu Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 8:08 AM
luv this KImo...congrats .....!!~sashi
Guzzi Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 7:27 AM
ahhh I know of those bangles from my trip to Nepal! Lovely Kash Light & Love
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February 26, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Congrats on your win! I love this kimo. Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 5:40 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kash. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 3:16 PM
I love this, Kashinath. BIg congrats to you.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 11:18 AM
congrats Kash on winning an HM for this exciting entry luv.. impressiive expressions.. bangles are tempting symbols indeed ..
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 8:33 PM
Kash,this one must be judged by now. Didn't it win. It was so wonderful. And I'm glad you really liked that one poem of mine, Blue ASter. had you not seen it before? (I think probably you had)
Song Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 1:05 PM
It WAS present tense...must have been a New Yrs hangover moment. h aha. Like the hyphen there too. This kimo is subtle and sensual....I bet it does well, as we all know, you are the romance poet of the Soup. ;)
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Awesome kimo, Kash. Keep making these short form poems. You will become a master of them!
Wesley Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Such a subtle romance Kashi, it all sounds like a lovely dream - Luv, Lizzie
Neels Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Kash, this one is awesome, all the best for David's contest ;)
Minardi Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 11:12 PM
Aww.. this is very sweet, Kash. You wife bangles' symphony is your best track, I suppose :)
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December 25, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Kash,, good luck in the contest.. the image is what i had in mind..for another contest..(the depth)) .p.d.
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December 25, 2011 at 7:32 PM
oh wow! definitely romantic. good luck on the contest dear kash, you surely won my heart with this. that last line, beautiful!
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Very expressive and romantic work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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