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Your Bangles' Symphony

My ears follow your bangles' symphony,
with closed eyes I see our sky,
rapture in horizon.



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Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/27/2012 10:54:00 AM

purrrrfect, kashi.. sweet congrats on your win..a glory in my eyes! :) huggs!

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 2/27/2012 8:08:00 AM

luv this KImo...congrats .....!!~sashi

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/27/2012 7:27:00 AM

ahhh I know of those bangles from my trip to Nepal! Lovely Kash Light & Love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/26/2012 9:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win! I love this kimo. Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/26/2012 5:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2012 3:16:00 PM

I love this, Kashinath. BIg congrats to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2012 11:18:00 AM

congrats Kash on winning an HM for this exciting entry luv.. impressiive expressions.. bangles are tempting symbols indeed ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2012 8:33:00 PM

Kash,this one must be judged by now. Didn't it win. It was so wonderful. And I'm glad you really liked that one poem of mine, Blue ASter. had you not seen it before? (I think probably you had)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/2/2012 1:05:00 PM

It WAS present tense...must have been a New Yrs hangover moment. h aha. Like the hyphen there too. This kimo is subtle and sensual....I bet it does well, as we all know, you are the romance poet of the Soup. ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2011 8:06:00 PM

Awesome kimo, Kash. Keep making these short form poems. You will become a master of them!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/26/2011 9:36:00 AM

Such a subtle romance Kashi, it all sounds like a lovely dream - Luv, Lizzie

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/26/2011 6:02:00 AM

Kash, this one is awesome, all the best for David's contest ;)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/25/2011 11:12:00 PM

Aww.. this is very sweet, Kash. You wife bangles' symphony is your best track, I suppose :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 9:55:00 PM

Kash,, good luck in the contest.. the image is what i had in mind..for another contest..(the depth)) .p.d.

M.I.A .

Date: 12/25/2011 7:32:00 PM

oh wow! definitely romantic. good luck on the contest dear kash, you surely won my heart with this. that last line, beautiful!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2011 5:03:00 PM

Very expressive and romantic work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Reads like winning material..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

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