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Your Arm Around My Shoulder

I rest peaceful, knowing you are there, my brother.
I will never need to feel alone,
with your arm, always around my shoulder.

Our boyhood antics, I will always treasure.
Should the day come, I feel the need to roam,
I rest peaceful, knowing you are there, my brother.

Standing together, life's bumps we will weather.
A better friend, I will have never known,
with your arm, always around my shoulder.

We are bound to get into trouble together,
as we pass each of life's milestones.
I rest peaceful, knowing you are there my brother.

Should I chance to stumble and falter,
I will look upon you as my cornerstone.
With your arm, always around my shoulder.

With all we'll share through the adventures
and the paths we will take when we're grown.
I rest peaceful, knowing you are there, my brother,
with your arm, always around my shoulder.


Paula Swanson
April 30, 2011

For the contest Brotherly Love
Sponsored by Miranda Lambert
Placement: 1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win, Paula. Sorry this comes late, nevertheless, it is genuine. My computer finally died so I'm not in the soup as often. Beautiful work, indeed! Love, Annalise
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May 28, 2011 at 5:41 AM
This Villanelle got to me Paula.. thinking about all my brothers and I have been through and continue to do. Thank almighty God I still have them. Thank you for sharing this inspiration. So fits in with that picture
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May 26, 2011 at 11:45 PM
sentimentally percious, paula! big cheers for the high win! :) huggs!
Brown Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 4:12 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in the "Brotherly Love" contest sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Such a loving poem of two little brothers, Paula!! (And perfect too for the sweet twins in your own family...how perfectly wonderful! ) Congratulations!
Taylor Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Paula. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
Long Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 8:44 AM
congrats on your win in the contest. cory
Horne Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Many congrats on your win, Paula : ) I love this from the baby's viewpoint - all the others I've read so far were from the elder brother's point of view
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 8:19 AM
wow paula you are nailing this form over & over...great job! Congrad's Light & Love
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May 24, 2011 at 7:54 AM
The feeling of love shines in your entry, Paula. Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
Dailey Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Nice poem. Mike
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May 24, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Congrats Paula on your first place win in Brotherly Luv contest with this super excellent write my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv.. for excellence...
Butterfly Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Heart-stopping interpretation of the pic of my boys...i swear every entry i've read today has brought me tears of motherhood...thank u for this beauty...soup mail love randa
Long Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 3:40 PM
this is very good, thanks for showing me a new form! good luck to you in the contest.. cory
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 4:48 PM
wow,you did an incredible job with this one and I doubt I need to wish luck. Love it!!!
Hendricks Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Nice one, Paula. Villanelle is one of the most difficult forms of poetry. Good luck in the contest. :)
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