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Your Abyss

A muffled voice barely audible his words are ice cold enough to freeze the warmest heart My Heart As heavy as lead slowly drowning me pulling me into a never ending abyss Darkness Silence Emotions my own madness taking control surrounded by my own desperation the more I struggle the more I become the rusty weather worn anchor oxygen deprived lungs Burning gasping at any change to feel alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 3/11/2016 2:48:00 AM
Darkness silence emotions say a lot.the desire to live amidst utter bleakness is a struggle esp when ur own heart drowns you.. But there's a small streak of life when u gasp n that's a revolution towards novelty ..excellent work . Love it
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:00:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Stephanie - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:30:00 AM
Stopping by once again :) Stephanie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:48:00 AM
Stephanie, a deep write, I like your style and the owning of madness ... wow, what a struggle. LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:54:00 AM
Warmest of welcomes to the PoetrySoup! I hope you'll continue to express yourself in this wonderful, friendly community! Here whenever you need ~ Michael :)
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:53:00 AM
Excellent sensory piece, Stephanie - very deep.
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