Your Abyss

A muffled voice barely audible
his words are ice
cold enough to freeze the warmest heart
My Heart
As heavy as lead
slowly drowning me
pulling me into a never ending abyss
Darkness
Silence
Emotions
my own madness taking control
surrounded by my own desperation 
the more I struggle 
the more I become the rusty weather worn anchor
oxygen deprived lungs
Burning
gasping at any change to feel alive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bhusal Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 2:48 AM
Darkness silence emotions say a lot.the desire to live amidst utter bleakness is a struggle esp when ur own heart drowns you.. But there's a small streak of life when u gasp n that's a revolution towards novelty ..excellent work . Love it
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 4:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Stephanie - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 18, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Stopping by once again :) Stephanie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Stephanie, a deep write, I like your style and the owning of madness ... wow, what a struggle. LINDA
Whatley Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Warmest of welcomes to the PoetrySoup! I hope you'll continue to express yourself in this wonderful, friendly community! Here whenever you need ~ Michael :)
Whatley Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 9:53 AM
Excellent sensory piece, Stephanie - very deep.
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