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For: Eight Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Are you synthetic? Your synapses seem to emanate computer code. No emotion swirling around your existence, no rustic vibes of simplicity. I crave the timeless story of passion, not the illusion of perfection. I want to blossom in the beating music of life, but I hear only the silence of your absent heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/27/2024 8:10:00 PM
flows effortlessly. congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/27/2024 8:12:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/27/2024 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. What a pretty picture...  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/27/2024 11:11:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/27/2024 5:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/27/2024 11:12:00 AM
Thank you. Using pre determined words is a challenge.
Date: 7/22/2024 11:22:00 PM
No adventure, no deal. I like this poem.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/23/2024 6:25:00 AM
Thank you. It was fun to write.

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