Your a Scum and Dirty Bum

Your very good at destroying
Young girls hearts who are enjoying
The attention that you give
But it is no way to live
When you control their every action
To fulfill the satisfaction
Of the men you share them with
Girls too young to know that this
Is not what love should really be
But they're confused and so lonely
Runaways that have nowhere
To go so you steal their
Innocence and make them think
You saved them all from the brink
Of living cold and alone
Pretending you'll give them a home
And as much care as they need
They're only helping you succeed
To make money every time
Their virtues put on the line
Your the worst scum of them all
Using girls so scared and small
I hope one day your found dead
With a bullet in your head
From someone trying to save
These girls from an early grave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 3/1/2014 4:15:00 AM
ha, love the poem and title Robin, . sweet write, Skat
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Date: 2/28/2014 2:40:00 AM
Good write and so true, also topical as this vileness has been in news recently. Totally agree with sentiments.
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Date: 2/27/2014 11:14:00 PM
Oh I love it, I see this every time a girl "falls in love" with any guy they think is hot or handsome. The man always disrespects, because he doesn't truly see what is in front of him, and has no fear of losing what he thinks he "loves" Such a true poem that reflects such truth, wisdom and pain. Again with the last 4 lines of the poem, I love it! a crazy great poem! :) xoxo
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