Nette Onclaud Poet Than-Bauk

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Young Man's Folly

Bold the venture
Of night’s lure… dazed
From tour in bars.

A vixen's grind
Flaunts her kind winks…
My mind's scheme flops!

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YOUR POEMS ARE NOT TRASH Contest 
For Marugo MO

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Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2016 at 12:35 AM Nette, awesome win. PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 20, 2016 at 10:32 PM Congrats on ur awesome winning write nette..

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2016 at 7:50 AM Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 5:52 PM Nette, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 7:21 PM Good seeing this one again on the winners' list. Congrats and I hope you are having a nice weekend.

Vladislav Raven March 11, 2016 at 8:41 AM Hi Nette, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

Funom Makama March 2, 2016 at 7:59 AM What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Janice Canerdy March 1, 2016 at 10:37 AM Good job with (I think) a difficult form, Nette. Janice

Andrea Dietrich February 29, 2016 at 4:01 PM aha!! You did it. Great improvement, Nette.

Timothy Hicks February 27, 2016 at 9:51 PM A very sassy feel to this, 'Nette. Those winks can be deceptive ... perhaps one should look for more re-assuring signs.

Daniel Turner February 27, 2016 at 6:15 PM What kind of a fool would deny you anything? I like the humor. Good luck, nette.

Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 1:34 PM I like it nette. a nice twist

Banjo Casto February 27, 2016 at 1:28 PM Smarty you; too bad for that guy who chases skirts. I like this irresistible verse!

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2016 at 12:55 PM Interesting work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..I just wrote that Minion one and did not know there was a contest but it has closed anyway or at least I think it has..Sara

CayCay Godwin February 27, 2016 at 12:34 PM I enjoyed this, Nette - very clever ... oh, good luck (always) ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2016 at 12:21 PM - ......... embarrassing - Well done, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)