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Bold the venture Of night’s lure… dazed From tour in bars. A vixen's grind Flaunts her kind winks… My mind's scheme flops! ………… YOUR POEMS ARE NOT TRASH Contest For Marugo MO

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2016 12:35:00 AM

Nette, awesome win. PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/20/2016 10:32:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write nette..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2016 7:50:00 AM

Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 5:52:00 PM

Nette, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 7:21:00 PM

Good seeing this one again on the winners' list. Congrats and I hope you are having a nice weekend.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/11/2016 8:41:00 AM

Hi Nette, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/2/2016 7:59:00 AM

What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/1/2016 10:37:00 AM

Good job with (I think) a difficult form, Nette. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2016 4:01:00 PM

aha!! You did it. Great improvement, Nette.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/27/2016 9:51:00 PM

A very sassy feel to this, 'Nette. Those winks can be deceptive ... perhaps one should look for more re-assuring signs.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/27/2016 6:15:00 PM

What kind of a fool would deny you anything? I like the humor. Good luck, nette.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/27/2016 1:34:00 PM

I like it nette. a nice twist

Banjo Casto

Date: 2/27/2016 1:28:00 PM

Smarty you; too bad for that guy who chases skirts. I like this irresistible verse!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2016 12:55:00 PM

Interesting work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..I just wrote that Minion one and did not know there was a contest but it has closed anyway or at least I think it has..Sara

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/27/2016 12:34:00 PM

I enjoyed this, Nette - very clever ... oh, good luck (always) ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2016 12:21:00 PM

- ......... embarrassing - Well done, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)