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Young Man Has To Change His Plans

Daddy won't let that man get away. He did the dirty deed; now the man must pay. In a very short time, the man will be a groom. If not, he will be facing certain doom. Daddy will make sure the man marries the little girl. Daddy has a shotgun, and he will pick him off like a squirrel. Inspired by another member's poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/3/2012 12:50:00 AM
congrats on your win Robert, the last line made me laugh out loud
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Date: 10/2/2012 8:53:00 PM
Well done, I remember when people used to talk so much about shot gun weddings, now people don't seem to care one way or the other. Well done and congrats on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/2/2012 2:33:00 PM
Robert, Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:17:00 PM
Geat job...great win...last line a killer! - Tim
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:12:00 PM
that last line is awesome, pick him off like a squirrel. A great chuckle line. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:32:00 AM
What a super win for you. Congratulations Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert , nice one xx
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Date: 8/28/2012 4:56:00 PM
What an interesting poem this is! I was just curious whose poem this could've come from! If I were that man, I would fear that gun! Marriage isn't so bad! Wonderful piece my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/28/2012 4:20:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one..I wonder if that still happens..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by.Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/28/2012 4:23:00 PM
We are getting some rain off the tropical storm or hurricane Isaac for the swirling cloud bands are reaching all the way up here..I don't know how long it will last but they say that it is a slow moving system..We definitely need the rain..Sara

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