Young Lovers

Met you when the days were dark
And the walls were high 
we both had the dreams
of lovers stars in our eyes
never thought Id see you break down and cry
But when you saw my pain you bled inside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bordner Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 2:21 PM
Sharing suffering can be beautiful, as you make it seem - J.A.B. %
Beaufort Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 10:25 AM
I guess you are saying that sensitive people have empathy. It's a tough thing to hide pain and then reveal it later. I can think of a lot of different applications from these words.
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 10:30 AM
- Touching, beautiful poem, Jay - Well done. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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