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Young Love

The petals open perfumed the stamens offer pollen fruit grows to full round ripeness petals dry fruit falls ©GG 27/08/2013

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Robin Davis

Date: 8/1/2014 10:54:00 PM

Mandy Very creative write about love and the way you compared it to a flower. Thank you for the nice comment on my Why God poem

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/3/2013 7:34:00 AM

What an awesome way to show young love Mandy, and you won with it as well :) hope you are having a great week thus far! hugs Wilma

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/8/2013 9:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Skat A

Date: 9/7/2013 9:11:00 PM

awesome win....SKAT

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/7/2013 8:06:00 PM

congrats on your win :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/7/2013 6:12:00 PM

Yup! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/7/2013 1:58:00 PM

so descriptive and daintily expressed, mandy.. cheers to you for your win, mandy!..:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/7/2013 7:19:00 AM

This is very visual. Well expressed, congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/7/2013 5:47:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2013 4:43:00 AM

congratulations on your win. .pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2013 11:13:00 PM

loving this one again on the winners' list, Mandy. Congrats to you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2013 3:08:00 PM

Very soft winning work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/29/2013 2:16:00 PM

Nice metaphorical expressive poem. Thank you for your humorous comment about the alligator and crocodile difference. You made me laugh really loud.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2013 2:45:00 PM

What a cool way to show young love, thru a flowering fruit!!! Nice one, mandy.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/27/2013 8:44:00 AM

this is so different from you Girl, yet as love matures so does your poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2013 2:23:00 AM

- Lovely written, Mandy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)