Young Love

The petals open perfumed
the stamens offer pollen
fruit grows to full round ripeness
petals dry fruit falls

©GG 27/08/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Mandy Very creative write about love and the way you compared it to a flower. Thank you for the nice comment on my Why God poem
Neels Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 7:34 AM
What an awesome way to show young love Mandy, and you won with it as well :) hope you are having a great week thus far! hugs Wilma
Morgan Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 9:57 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
A  Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 9:11 PM
awesome win....SKAT
Adams Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 8:06 PM
congrats on your win :)
Guzzi Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 6:12 PM
Yup! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 1:58 PM
so descriptive and daintily expressed, mandy.. cheers to you for your win, mandy!..:) huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 7:19 AM
This is very visual. Well expressed, congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 5:47 AM
Congrats on the win
A   Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 4:43 AM
congratulations on your win. .pd
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 11:13 PM
loving this one again on the winners' list, Mandy. Congrats to you.
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 3:08 PM
Very soft winning work..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
Phillips Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:16 PM
Nice metaphorical expressive poem. Thank you for your humorous comment about the alligator and crocodile difference. You made me laugh really loud.
Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:45 PM
What a cool way to show young love, thru a flowering fruit!!! Nice one, mandy.
Horsman Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 8:44 AM
this is so different from you Girl, yet as love matures so does your poetry.
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:23 AM
- Lovely written, Mandy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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