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Young Love

In deafening silence I wait for my big date It doesn't seem fair to have butterflies floating furiously within my stomach and scattered thoughts floating abruptly in my head

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/1/2011 8:51:00 AM
Karen, This is well written short poem. The butterflies floating within my stomach is a beautiful phrase. Thanks also for sharing my thoughts of poem Yesteryears. -Mohammad
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Date: 3/1/2011 8:15:00 AM
Ahhh, an awesome moment captured. I love that "butterfly" feeling. I miss it too. Nicely done.
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