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Young Love

An innocent glance A coy blushing smile Our words will dance With shy sheepish style A very quick look Soft whispered Hi The nerve it took had to at least try A very young crush A puppy kinda love How youth will rush As love they think of An accidental touch Embarrassed laughter Thoughts filled with much Like a happily ever after

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Date: 1/6/2020 10:37:00 PM
LOVE- EVERGREEN GRACEFUL FEELINGS OF HEART///
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/8/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 8/29/2019 8:46:00 PM
A sweet poem, just like young love! I enjoyed this, Brenda! Blessings, Kim
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 3:42:00 AM
Kim thank you so very much!;)
Date: 8/29/2019 7:10:00 PM
Uncanny, how you bring back EXACTLY how it felt for so many of us, including me. Super, Brenda! :) gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 7:13:00 PM
Well thank you once more! Yes I can remember that feeling also and it's so innocent that it is shocking that I can!;) I do appreciate you reading and for your wonderful comments!;)
Date: 8/29/2019 1:47:00 PM
awww how sweet! lovely poem sweet Brenda :)-luloo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thank so much! I really appreciate your comment and read!;)
Date: 8/29/2019 11:08:00 AM
This was fun to read and reminisce back to those youthful days when love was new and kind of scary. Really nicely crafted
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thx chris appreciate it! And really it was more than kinda scary! Lol anyway it was for me! Terrifying is what it was! ;)
Date: 8/29/2019 9:04:00 AM
Brenda, I like this poem. Such a nice write on youthful love. Though the touch may not be so accidental. -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Richard!im so glad you enjoyed it!;)

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