Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Young Love

An innocent glance
A coy blushing smile
Our words will dance
With shy sheepish style

A very quick look
Soft whispered Hi 
The nerve it took
had to at least try

A very young crush
A puppy kinda love
How youth will rush
As love they think of

An accidental touch
Embarrassed laughter
Thoughts filled with much
Like a happily ever after

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Mahtab Bangalee January 6, 2020 at 10:37 PM LOVE- EVERGREEN GRACEFUL FEELINGS OF HEART/// Brenda Chiri January 8, 2020 at 12:48 PM Thank you so much!;)

Kim Merryman August 29, 2019 at 8:46 PM A sweet poem, just like young love! I enjoyed this, Brenda! Blessings, Kim Brenda Chiri August 30, 2019 at 3:42 AM Kim thank you so very much!;)

Gershon Wolf August 29, 2019 at 7:10 PM Uncanny, how you bring back EXACTLY how it felt for so many of us, including me. Super, Brenda! :) gw Brenda Chiri August 29, 2019 at 7:13 PM Well thank you once more! Yes I can remember that feeling also and it's so innocent that it is shocking that I can!;) I do appreciate you reading and for your wonderful comments!;)

Beautiful Scars August 29, 2019 at 1:47 PM awww how sweet! lovely poem sweet Brenda :)-luloo Brenda Chiri August 29, 2019 at 1:57 PM Thank so much! I really appreciate your comment and read!;)

Chris Green August 29, 2019 at 11:08 AM This was fun to read and reminisce back to those youthful days when love was new and kind of scary. Really nicely crafted Brenda Chiri August 29, 2019 at 12:57 PM Thx chris appreciate it! And really it was more than kinda scary! Lol anyway it was for me! Terrifying is what it was! ;)

Quoth Theraven August 29, 2019 at 9:04 AM Brenda, I like this poem. Such a nice write on youthful love. Though the touch may not be so accidental. -Richard Brenda Chiri August 29, 2019 at 9:31 AM Thank you Richard!im so glad you enjoyed it!;)