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Poetic Form: Monorhyme (Monotetra Form)
Inspired: 2023 December 10
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Dangling hair, girls twirl, drum majors, Baseball turned cap boys, screenagers, Gum chew boys, girls curls, tweenagers, Just teenagers, just teenagers. Pixie sticks tootsie rolls swallows, Gummy bears m & m's follows, Reeses cups hershey bars hollows, Tidbits mellows, tidbits mellows. Marshmallow pillow stuffing jams, Strawberries dribble squishing rams, Peach clings and lemon rings swim crams, Dollops mouth slams dollops mouth slams. Dressed up, lollipop, a cutesome, Suit, tie, flowers guy, a twosome, Hoodies, both moody, don't getsome, Great into some, great into some.

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Date: 12/11/2023 10:49:00 AM
awesome monorhymes and we all should be young at heart, but keep the wisdom.. Don't you agree?
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Date: 12/12/2023 12:21:00 AM
The Monotetra Form re Monorhyme, Kimo, and that Anc...
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Date: 12/11/2023 11:25:00 AM
My approach to the unknown is for what it is, an enigma--puzzles, my friend, do not present themselves with answers. Ergo, challenges come to you like a sack of beans--it already has attitude. Why be the same? --my friend. Aloha, William

Book: Reflection on the Important Things