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Young Flower Bud

Alone in the cold a young bud will wait, to finally bloom before its too late, hoping that others around him will grow, to accompany him while he learns what they know. When it is finally warm enough for his petals to open, he will reach towards the sun because he has been chosen, to grow with all of his energy and might, and make the earth much more colorful and bright. Once he has stayed as much as he can, he will hide from the world just like the plan, to be cozy and warm while the cold moves in, and keep the beauty he needs when he comes back again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/14/2011 6:36:00 AM
Thank you everyone for being so being so nice! :D
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Date: 6/13/2011 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Caitlin. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 11:01:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Caitlin
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Poet Destroyer's "Best Blossom Design" contest Caitlin. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:54:00 PM
congrats Caitlin on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great one to share luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:02:00 PM
CAITLIN~~ A SUPER ~Congratulations 4 this wonderful FLOWER entry!!!! Thank you it was an honor to have you support my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:26:00 AM
Very nice take on the seasons and cycle of life, Caitlin. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2011 7:46:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Caitlin
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:42:00 PM
very nicely done. Congrats on your win with this poetry flower bud!
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:10:00 PM
Very nice. Congratlations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/10/2011 8:59:00 PM
Congrats Caitilin on your super win in PD's contest of blooming flowers.. enjoy sweet success for excellence luv..
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Date: 6/10/2011 5:18:00 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Caitlin. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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