Notes About The Poem

Young Canvas

Youth’s power
Creams and powder
Textures and colour
Canvas made prettier
Lips more tender
Cheekbones rosier
Eyes like Cleopatra’s daughter



AP: 3rd place 2025

Submitted for A LATE DECEMBER STANDARD CONTEST sponsored be BRIAN STRAND - December 22, 2017  -  RANKED 3RD
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Krampe Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Congrats on your win, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:29 PM
Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 11:14 PM
Oh that is good. Congratulations on your win Line :) xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Thank you, Maureen. Greatly appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Love it, Line! Congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 8:42 AM
This should do well.:0)
Gauthier Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Thanks for your visit, Richard.
Canerdy Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Very descriptive piece, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:46 PM
Thanks for your visit, Janice.
Ashley Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Your sentiments are beautifully and poetically expressed Line. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 12:06 PM
Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated.
Blanca Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:09 AM
A young girl is love that we can see. Good write Gauthier
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Thank you, Carlos. Appreciate your visit.
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