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Young Canvas

Youth’s power Creams and powder Textures and colour Canvas made prettier Lips more tender Cheekbones rosier Eyes like Cleopatra’s daughter Submitted for A LATE DECEMBER STANDARD CONTEST sponsored be BRIAN STRAND - December 22, 2017 - RANKED 3RD

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/25/2017 9:59:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/25/2017 9:29:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes. Much appreciated.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/24/2017 11:14:00 PM

Oh that is good. Congratulations on your win Line :) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/25/2017 9:30:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen. Greatly appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/24/2017 8:25:00 PM

Love it, Line! Congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/25/2017 9:30:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 8:42:00 AM

This should do well.:0)

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/23/2017 11:55:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, Richard.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/22/2017 10:22:00 PM

Very descriptive piece, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2017 10:46:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Janice.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/22/2017 10:52:00 AM

Your sentiments are beautifully and poetically expressed Line. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2017 12:06:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. Much appreciated.

Lunita Blanca

Date: 12/22/2017 10:09:00 AM

A young girl is love that we can see. Good write Gauthier

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2017 12:05:00 PM

Thank you, Carlos. Appreciate your visit.