Young Buck

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My husband planted a Walnut Tree and the young buck ruined it so we thought but it survived...

When they have antelers this size, they will ruin young trees..They don't rub on big trees but seek out tiny ones..

. Young buck with antlers Newly planted black walnut.. Rubbing up and down

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/11/2011 4:38:00 PM

I'm glad you mentioned this beauty, Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/7/2009 8:17:00 AM

Another day we are blessed to be here reading and writing poetry. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Sara. Love, Carol

Sue Mason

Date: 8/6/2009 9:16:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in so few words. Wonderful write here, Sara !!

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/6/2009 8:53:00 PM

I can see the young buck with his sprouting antlers rubbing the tree bark. Great images and great Haiku! Thank you for your comments, always appreciated.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/6/2009 5:13:00 PM

sounds unfinished, needs a 12 gauge in there.

James Fraser

Date: 8/6/2009 3:25:00 PM

Nicely written Haiku, you have certainly mastered this form. I just seem to get spurts of the form, bak to the classroom for me. I have read Doris's poems, she's taking after her mum>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/6/2009 1:51:00 PM

hope some savory nuts falls to the ground so I can make black-walnut ice-cream and cake!!!! love this haiku! Sara!!