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Young At Heart

What did I do yesterday? Where did I put my phone? My back is feeling stiffer yet and now my kids are grown But I'm still a youthful soul, I don't need to see the mirror For since I took my glasses off, my vision's never been clearer ........... YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Beata Agustin
Date: 8/25/2021 1:20:00 AM
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Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for the chuckle it has created. God bless you.
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Avery Won
Date: 8/25/2021 4:39:00 AM
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Thank you Beata :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/24/2021 8:25:00 PM
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Delightful ~ fun poem. Mirrors have got to be the worst invention !
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Avery Won
Date: 8/25/2021 4:39:00 AM
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They're both good and evil haha - thanks!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2021 12:17:00 PM
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I can relate lol thanks for the smile Avery, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 12:43:00 PM
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Thanks :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/23/2021 9:39:00 AM
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CONGRATULATIONS on your high placement in my contest, Avery. I loved your four liner! This place out of 50 entries is nothing to sneeze at!
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Avery Won
Date: 8/23/2021 9:50:00 AM
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Thank you so much :)

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