Young

Young;
I’m strong,
Do no wrong,
Thrilling the throng…
singing a sweet song.
This is where I belong
Living with words all along…

inspirationalrhyme

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 19, 2010 at 8:33 PM

So as we all live ...with words all along Adeleke.. a wonderful contribution to entertain us with these wonderful words luv... enjoyed.. super creative .. happy weekend... what happend to Tirzah?

Duncan Chappell

November 18, 2010 at 5:42 PM

nice a short but has a good point to it my friend

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

November 15, 2010 at 3:18 AM

Adeleke, you are so blessed with rhymes and imagery. well done sir. love, Lightening Ink.

Nate D.

October 15, 2010 at 12:01 PM

interesting write my friend'

Kolapo Olapoju

October 7, 2010 at 3:03 AM

Nice

Milton Toran

September 23, 2010 at 3:08 PM

Short, simple, and straight to the point! This expresses the real you. When you've got it, you've got it! Why not flaunt it? Great job! Milt

Andrew Crisci

September 22, 2010 at 7:17 AM

What a thoughtful, inspiring and honest poem, Adeleke! This is the very reflection of your beautiful soul. Thanks for placing my poem in your contest, " Through...Thoughtful... Thankful." It is always a pleasure and honor to enter your inpiring contests. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration, Andrew.