Michael Tor Poet Rhyme

You'Ll Get Back, What You'Ve Given Me

You came to me, like a drifting breeze,  
and shared your love so tenderly.
     
Loving you with open arms, looking for
love, that I had longed.

You took away my lonesome heart, and
gave my life a brand new start.

The winds they changed, I don't know      (repeat)
why.                                                     
Thought it was love, was I surprised.       (repeat)

She said, "I'm sorry hon, I must move on.
Don't be sad, you'll find someone."    

My heart and soul you stole from me and 
now you walk away so free.

I can't look back, there is too much pain.
I'll try and love and trust again.

I walk alone, this lonesome road, and want
my heart back that you stole.

Life isn't fair you wait and see. You'll get  (repeat) Total 2 times
back, what you've given me.




Michael Tor    (song)

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Angie Thomas November 18, 2015 at 9:18 AM i can totally relate to what you're going though in these verses... the exact same thing happened to me this month... it hurts so much...but the belief that we will recover is what keep us going right? :) Angie Thomas November 20, 2015 at 6:10 AM Aww.. Thank you micheal... it makes it so much worse when you finally think that he's different from the rest.... :'( but I'm doing okay.... I hope you have great holidays too :) ^-^ Michael Tor November 19, 2015 at 3:57 PM Hi Angie I am so sorry this happened to you. This is awful. I hope you have support from your loved ones. You are correct this is what keeps us going. Angie someone better will be with you before you know it. Be patient though make sure you have someone that is sincere and honest. God bless you and I hope you will have happy holidays in spite of your loss.

James Inman November 13, 2015 at 8:01 AM I can hear the tune ringing in my head Michael. Very nice. Michael Tor November 15, 2015 at 7:56 PM Thank you James.

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2015 at 7:13 PM a sad one, Michael. Good for a country singer!! Michael Tor November 12, 2015 at 1:24 AM lol. I want it to be rock. Your right though Andrea lol. Thank you for your sweet comment..

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis November 11, 2015 at 3:59 PM I like everything about your song, for it is positively creative therapy as a matter of fact; and that's that. Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 6:48 PM Thank you Iris thanks for stopping by my Dear. Thank you for your kind comments.

Tim Smith November 11, 2015 at 3:28 PM Nice song Michael...love the ending line Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 6:45 PM Thanks Tim good luck going up against Sir Jackson.

Afolabi Muideen November 11, 2015 at 12:06 PM Wow! What a lovely and excellent poem. Your wonderful write flows smoothly within my heart. A brilliant lyric.............A.M. Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 6:09 PM Thank you Afolabi for your kind comments my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 11, 2015 at 7:05 AM A romantic heart easily can turn its feelings into a song for heartbeats become notes of a melody composed by love, my brother Michael! Superb and a seven+. Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 11:51 AM Thank you Demetrios for your thoughtful comments. God Bless you.

Joan Donnelly Ellis November 11, 2015 at 5:20 AM As goes the song: "Only love can break a heart, only love can mend it again". May yours be mended soon-hugs Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 11:50 AM Hi Joan I wrote this for our Rock band. Thank you for your caring comment. I'm glad your back.

Lin Lane November 11, 2015 at 4:02 AM g'morning, Michael. I can sing this. Very well done. Lin Lane November 11, 2015 at 4:10 AM So you do write music...how wonderful....Early rising has been my pattern for a long time, but I like the quiet mornings. Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 4:05 AM Hi Lin good morning Dear you are an early bird. I couldnt sleep. I had to come up with a song we are putting to music. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day, and be blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2015 at 3:50 AM - A song with emotion, Michael - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 4:07 AM Thanks Anne-Lise. We have to put it to music now. Thanks for visiting. I hope you have a great day.

Skat A November 11, 2015 at 3:36 AM Yes, Michael, karma will get her back. A sad song, yet I love your rap. No need in looking back. HUGS. SKAT Michael Tor November 11, 2015 at 4:08 AM Thanks Skat. Now I have to put it to music. Thanks for visiting.