You'Ll Be Hunted Till the End After You Hurt My Best Friend

Your life isn't going well
In your eyes this I can tell
In me will you please confide
You don't have to run and hide
From my friendship true and real
I want to know how you feel
What happened that made you cry
And make your heart cease to fly
With the joy and happiness
That I used to love and see
Now the darkness takes its place
And moistness covers your face
When I found out who did this
They are gonna get a kiss
From my fist right to their cheek
My anger is right at the peak
To destroy the evil one 
Who dares have a lying tongue
Putting you down with harsh words
After all that I have heard
Someone's gonna be in fright
When I hunt them in the night
They will soon become my prey
Their hair is gonna turn grey
From how scared I'll make them be
Messing with my "family"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 10:21 PM
You really let your emotions out in this one! Having that realism is a rare quality among writers. They seem to be afraid of letting their true feelings be heard, and I don't understand that...Great rhyming in this poem and the flow is very smooth. Very good work, Robin!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem. :)
Pettit Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 10:10 PM
You apparently are seeking revenge against someone who has hurt your friend or relative. Once again, good descriptiveness and rhyming.
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