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You'd Never Know

You'd never know Surely no one could tell I almost took my life ten months ago From the flames inside that burned a living hell Where demons dwell and angels ache to break free from below It mustn't show, the absent soul hidden within a counterfeit shell

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Tom Woody

Date: 4/15/2025 5:48:00 AM

I have a relative who's tried half a dozen times. Doing better now. If this is true glad you're still around Rebecca

Rebecca Kiser
Date: 4/15/2025 9:16:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Life sends surprises very frequently. Sometimes they bring you past your knees and plant your face in the ground. So it did for me. But God has been good. I have found it is a choice to believe and keep going- a choice that takes a ton of faith and trust- but nevertheless can be just enough for God to work His miracles. Thank you again for your kind words. My heart aches for your relative and for you. May God bless you