you will feel much better

My cough was empty, my lungs struggling
There was no mucus, I was worn out from the hacking
My mother put Vicks vapor rub all over me
The soles of my feet, my back, my neck, my chest

It was two a.m. we were desperate for sleep.
She fixed me vanilla chamomile tea
Stirred in honey
Drink this, she told me. You will be much better

Nothing helped my sore throat before this tea.
After this tea, I was a little better
My cough subsided enough so I could sleep
This was 1962, and I have never forgotten it.
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Allison Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 11:17 AM
aww Caren such memories linger - I still for the life of me don't understand the vicks vapor rub on feet lol but I am assured it works. i love your quirky style Caren! write on with your fabulous real poetry!! hugs Jan xx
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June 24, 2025 at 11:16 AM
it does work- thank you Jan
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