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You Will Feel

be mindful human rights are human ways that lead down be careful the words above always remain wear no crown trap the sin destroy the lie of conceit look within don't consume all that you see you will feel wrong like fire

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/8/2013 5:40:00 AM

feelings very well portrayed nice share ty Shadow x smile

... Gigno

Date: 9/7/2013 1:44:00 PM

!!!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/7/2013 9:22:00 AM

Laura, I like this so much. You say what you have to say so elegantly. Sometimes you are with many words and sometimes you are brief and pithy. You are a light for the soul of humanity. This is biblical in its message. It is worthy of being etched on a tablet as part of the 14 commandments.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2013 6:05:00 PM

Hey Laura, wow.. wrong like fire... what a burning feeling... don't like the feel.. LOL.. however i enjoyed your senryu... always~ Linda

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/2/2013 4:58:00 PM

Somebody has been on fire lately. ;-) May that fuse stay lit! Awesome! Destroy that conceit...

Dan Kearley

Date: 9/2/2013 1:10:00 AM

A very strong message here. Jeepers! words are just flowing from your pen today. :o)