You Will Feel

be mindful
human rights are human ways
that lead down

be careful
the words above always remain
wear no crown

trap the sin
destroy the lie of conceit
look within

don't consume all that you see
you will feel
wrong like fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 5:40 AM
feelings very well portrayed nice share ty Shadow x smile
Gigno Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 1:44 PM
!!!
Beaufort Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Laura, I like this so much. You say what you have to say so elegantly. Sometimes you are with many words and sometimes you are brief and pithy. You are a light for the soul of humanity. This is biblical in its message. It is worthy of being etched on a tablet as part of the 14 commandments.
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September 2, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Hey Laura, wow.. wrong like fire... what a burning feeling... don't like the feel.. LOL.. however i enjoyed your senryu... always~ Linda
Tacito Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Somebody has been on fire lately. ;-) May that fuse stay lit! Awesome! Destroy that conceit...
Kearley Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 1:10 AM
A very strong message here. Jeepers! words are just flowing from your pen today. :o)
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