You Whom Is Cherished In the Soul Domain

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I began this by stepping up
slowly until it reaches the perfect platform
where the title measures in peaking the highest note

Looking upon you a stargazing beauty born from the dust of ashes moulded perfectly adoring Angel formed white lustre inside the deepest darkness lovingly you came with warm light adorned with silver diamond gems twinkle over oceans landing perfect Mist of a promise warmly kissing eyes rainbows colours every shade of heaven circling a golden halo all around

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Charlie Smith

Date: 2/7/2017 12:34:00 PM

Brilliantly Beautiful Liam, every shade of heaven...

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/7/2017 9:13:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^