I began this by stepping up slowly until it reaches the perfect platform where the title measures in peaking the highest note
Looking upon you a stargazing beauty born from the dust of ashes moulded perfectly adoring Angel formed white lustre inside the deepest darkness lovingly you came with warm light adorned with silver diamond gems twinkle over oceans landing perfect Mist of a promise warmly kissing eyes rainbows colours every shade of heaven circling a golden halo all around
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