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Notes About The Poem

I began this by stepping up 
slowly until it reaches the perfect platform 
where the title measures in peaking the highest note 

You Whom Is Cherished In the Soul Domain

Looking upon you
a stargazing beauty 
born from the dust of ashes
moulded perfectly adoring 

Angel formed white lustre 
inside the deepest darkness
lovingly you came with warm light 
adorned with silver diamond gems 
twinkle over oceans landing perfect 

Mist of a promise warmly kissing eyes
rainbows colours every shade of heaven 
circling a golden halo all around

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Charlie Smith Date: 2/7/2017 12:34:00 PM Brilliantly Beautiful Liam, every shade of heaven... Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/7/2017 9:13:00 AM Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply