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You Were Right

As i sit here contimplating suicide A I try to remember why im even alive B I dont contribute to society C And i push people away blatantly C One cut for each of the people ive hurt D I dont have to cover these up with a long sleeved shirt D They bleed and bleed until i dont think theyll stop E One more second and i think i might drop E They sting and burn F And twist and turn F Seems i cant even do that right G Look! I think i can see the light G Goodbye H Ill fly H Tonight G You were right.G

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Date: 4/25/2018 1:28:00 PM
The wonderful imaginations of you in my head. Good grief! We all think it, but none of us have ever written this down, until now. Well-written! Well done.
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Date: 4/25/2018 1:25:00 PM
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, I was saying yes at the end of every line. yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, Gail, thank you for writing this poem. It went straight into my heart.
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Date: 4/25/2018 1:21:00 PM
And isn't this the truth? YES! Time does heal everything, or at least, makes it better.Well-written, and well-thought out prior to the writing, Kristelle. Good show, Woman!
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Date: 4/25/2018 1:17:00 PM
This one is darling. I had to read it three times to figure it out; I love the curiosity it formulated in my brain. I have not felt this curious or satisfifed in a long time. Well-done, Lisle. Well done!
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Date: 4/25/2018 1:13:00 PM
My temperament it does shape; this is so absolutely true. When I hear 60's and 70's music while driving I've suddenly jumped for 45 mpht 90 mph.
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