Tani Gipson Poet Free verse

You Were My Everything

At first, it was just a moonlight walk, 
At first, it was just small talk, 
At first, it was just a dream, 
At first, it was all I could see.

Moving along, my dream became reality,
Moving along, you were everything my mind could see, 
Moving along, you were my everything,

Now, I am one speck of dirt to your reality,
Now, You will never see the real me, 

At last, all we had disappeared.

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Ra Shagun July 3, 2017 at 3:32 PM Great use of words ...an amazing creation Tani..I loved it.

Dean Wood July 3, 2017 at 2:56 PM Oh, so sad! Well written Tani!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2017 at 1:26 PM - New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first great (but sad) poem, Tani :) - // Sun :)

Jay Vee June 6, 2017 at 10:32 AM I can feel every word. Excellent poem! Tani Gipson June 6, 2017 at 2:54 PM Thank you. I put emotion into it.

Darren White June 6, 2017 at 1:38 AM I love it how you move from first, moving along, now to at last... It is a poem with sadness in it. Welcome to PoetrySoup :) Tani Gipson June 6, 2017 at 6:31 AM Thank you!