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You were my everything

At first, it was just a moonlight walk, At first, it was just small talk, At first, it was just a dream, At first, it was all I could see. Moving along, my dream became reality, Moving along, you were everything my mind could see, Moving along, you were my everything, Now, I am one speck of dirt to your reality, Now, You will never see the real me, At last, all we had disappeared.

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Date: 7/3/2017 3:32:00 PM
Great use of words amazing creation Tani..I loved it.
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Date: 7/3/2017 2:56:00 PM
Oh, so sad! Well written Tani!
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Date: 6/7/2017 1:26:00 PM
- New to Poetry Soup ... Welcome and thanks for your first great (but sad) poem, Tani :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 10:32:00 AM
I can feel every word. Excellent poem!
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Tani Gipson
Date: 6/6/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thank you. I put emotion into it.
Date: 6/6/2017 1:38:00 AM
I love it how you move from first, moving along, now to at last... It is a poem with sadness in it. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Tani Gipson
Date: 6/6/2017 6:31:00 AM
Thank you!