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You Were In My Dream Premiere Contest Winner

You were in my dream. What does it mean? You were by my side when we had to hide. We saw the shooting stars. We saw the moon lit glistening lake. We heard the wind in the trees. We felt the cold embrace. You were in my dream. You were there with me. You've seen what I've seen. You were in my dream. What does it mean? I see you standing there. Standing without a care. Then you turn your head and see me. You turn upon your feet. You walk straight up to me. You stand in front of me. We're strangers but together we have been? We're strangers but together we've seen? We're strangers, never before did we meet? You look at me so quizzically. Nodding then shaking your head you say to me... How can this be? You were in my dream. James Young, ‘HUMAN’ Olympia publishers 2023

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Date: 1/3/2017 6:00:00 PM
Good and imaginative. Congrats on winning.
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Date: 1/3/2017 2:08:00 PM
Wouldn't it be great if dreams like this did come true:-) Many congrats on your win T I R O. JY:-)
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:54:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thanks very much for your comments. Dreams can be so compelling and weird. Cheers, Tiro
Date: 1/3/2017 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations T.I.R.O. JY, well done...
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Date: 1/3/2017 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win with this wonderful writing of yours.
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:52:00 PM
Hi Afzal, Thanks very much for your comments and praise. Cheers, Tiro.
Date: 1/3/2017 11:58:00 AM
How lovely! Congratulations on your top win! Janice
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:51:00 PM
Hi Janice, Thanks very much for your comments. Cheers, Tiro
Date: 1/3/2017 11:39:00 AM
Wow, this reads beautifully. Congratulations on first place.
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:50:00 PM
Hi Lewis, Thanks very much for selecting my poem for 1st place. I'm glad you liked it. You see so many people in your dreams that you have never met. I often think that these people are real, because they have such uniqueness in character and life experiences and that makes me muse the possibility of when they're in your dream are you in their's? Cheers, Tiro.
Date: 11/9/2016 4:31:00 PM
Well written mysterious poem :)
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Date: 11/13/2016 5:10:00 PM
Hi Heidi, Thanks for your comments. Cheers, Tiro
Date: 11/9/2016 4:15:00 PM
A wonderful romantic poem that holds a deeper meaning. Well written.
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Date: 11/9/2016 4:19:00 PM
Hi Christy, Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you liked it. Cheers, Tiro

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