Tim Smith Poet Free verse

You Touched My Heart

Hammock swings the blue bird sings

another lazy afternoon

thoughts of a Paris romance

dinner for two

oh how you made me swoon

Many birthday wishes and moonlight kisses

that day I said I do

That Monalisa's  smile, how I stared for a while

a soft lavender breeze

those flowers in your hair

how we made our feelings a home

Not a day goes by when I don't remember that time

Squeezing me tight, how could I ever depart 

When you touched my hand,

and entered my life

 you touched every inch of my heart

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Arthur Vaso March 8, 2015 at 8:18 PM Another beauty, loved the lines," another lazy afternoon thoughts of a Paris romance dinner for two"

Carolyn Devonshire March 3, 2015 at 4:38 PM Dear Tim, I love the way your describe this special lady and especially the Mona Lisa smile that brought you together. I hope you are enjoying much happiness, my friend. Beautifully written! Love, carolyn

Demetrios Trifiatis March 3, 2015 at 11:10 AM Irresistibly tender and romantic! A real gem of poetry! A seven, dear Tim!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 3, 2015 at 1:17 AM Great beauty and romance in every word Tim! Love the lavender!!

Charmaine Chircop March 2, 2015 at 9:55 PM 'When you touched my hand,and entered my life,you touched every inch of my heart'..Extremely beautoful!What a romantic poem!How can one forget a dinner like that.The lavender breeze and the Eiffel Tower in Paris : )..A favourite. Charmaine Chircop March 2, 2015 at 9:57 PM Beautiful I meant..Sorry for the beautifol..: )Got confused ..Sorry for typo Timothy :)

Casarah Nance March 2, 2015 at 8:43 PM aww you painted a pretty love scene again Tim nicely done

Njeri Hunjeri March 2, 2015 at 5:13 PM So sweet. #7