You Touched My Heart

Hammock swings the blue bird sings another lazy afternoon thoughts of a Paris romance dinner for two oh how you made me swoon Many birthday wishes and moonlight kisses that day I said I do That Monalisa's smile, how I stared for a while a soft lavender breeze those flowers in your hair how we made our feelings a home Not a day goes by when I don't remember that time Squeezing me tight, how could I ever depart When you touched my hand, and entered my life you touched every inch of my heart

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Date: 3/8/2015 8:18:00 PM
Another beauty, loved the lines," another lazy afternoon thoughts of a Paris romance dinner for two"
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Date: 3/3/2015 4:38:00 PM
Dear Tim, I love the way your describe this special lady and especially the Mona Lisa smile that brought you together. I hope you are enjoying much happiness, my friend. Beautifully written! Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2015 11:10:00 AM
Irresistibly tender and romantic! A real gem of poetry! A seven, dear Tim!
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Date: 3/3/2015 1:17:00 AM
Great beauty and romance in every word Tim! Love the lavender!!
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Date: 3/2/2015 9:55:00 PM
'When you touched my hand,and entered my life,you touched every inch of my heart'..Extremely beautoful!What a romantic poem!How can one forget a dinner like that.The lavender breeze and the Eiffel Tower in Paris : )..A favourite.
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Date: 3/2/2015 9:57:00 PM
Beautiful I meant..Sorry for the beautifol..: )Got confused ..Sorry for typo Timothy :)
Date: 3/2/2015 8:43:00 PM
aww you painted a pretty love scene again Tim nicely done
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Date: 3/2/2015 5:13:00 PM
So sweet. #7
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