- You Touch My Heart So Gently -

Warm raindrops fall like pearls
                       Yes, like pearls from heaven they fall
                           warm drops from love`s breath
                             which adds misted windows
                       Your lips pressed lightly against mine
                             I glide into a beautiful dream
                            Floating on warm white clouds
                               and sweet summer winds
                   You are what my heart has always longed for
                            You touch my heart so gently
                           Your presence gives me warmth
                           Your confidence gives me peace
                                Love me ... as I love you
                                 Show me your paradise
                              Two hearts melting together
                                     in a world of love
                             together we go on a journey
                                  In a storm of illusions






25.08.2014
A-L Andresen :)
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Duet Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:09 AM
This is such a "loverly" poem. Tender love...
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August 25, 2016 at 5:41 AM
- Carole, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Wheeler Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Very pretty and illustrative!
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April 13, 2015 at 2:48 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Ronald :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Staton Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Loved this poem. It felt like a soft fluffy pillow. It had wonderful imagery.9ps
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:29 AM
- Valerie, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Ahh.. A true dose of quiet euphoria,, Anne Lise.. Beautiful write, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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December 12, 2014 at 2:57 AM
- Arlene, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Schneiter Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 7:10 AM
There may be a sweeter, more touching love poem, but I have my doubts. Thank you, Anne Lise, for a beautiful composition.
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December 8, 2014 at 7:12 AM
- Paul, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 28, 2014 at 8:30 AM
:) :) :) :) Sometimes I smile and literally hope that the other person can see through my smile cos some words are just too hard to put to speech...:) :) :) If you can't I'll just say "Love me as I love you"
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November 28, 2014 at 8:33 AM
- Dear Yolanda, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 11, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Anne thanks for your words of encouragement it will go a long way in my heart and my work of art! Look forward to reading more of you ..for me you touch my heart so gently was perfect. Cheers thanks Best regards Roseline
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November 11, 2014 at 10:39 AM
- Dear Roselone, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Fox Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Anne, This one is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt. I could feel the emotion flow out as I read it. You must truly be a deep and loving soul. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for your comment on my first submission! Wish the best for you. Al Keith Fox
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October 2, 2014 at 11:53 AM
- Alvah, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Martin Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 2:20 AM
BEAUTIFUL
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:45 AM
- Angela, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Breese Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Very lovely.
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 11:53 AM
- Richard, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 20, 2014 at 4:15 PM
This is extremely beautiful it was a wonderful read and still flowing through my mind. Lovely l.k.n
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September 21, 2014 at 11:53 AM
- L.K.N., thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:33 PM
This one sings from start to finish in a loving melody. As smooth as silk and such a joy to read. Bravo!!! I gave it a super 7 rating..
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 2:33 AM
- Robert, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 6, 2014 at 4:40 PM
You are one, if not the best, writers of love poetry around. You always seem to so effortlessly put the right words in front of each other..... Great writing..... Jake
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September 7, 2014 at 4:04 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments,Jake :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 4, 2014 at 3:14 PM
Very beautifully written, Anne Lise. You warmed my heart with this one and invited me to experience part of your journey of illusions. Life can be the greatest of illusions when shared in love. Such a wonderful poem, my friend. Loved it..... Robert.
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September 5, 2014 at 2:09 AM
- Robert, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Wallack Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 9:54 PM
That last line was spectacular. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 3:48 AM
- Spencer, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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August 31, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Very nice kiddo, always a fan :)
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 3:00 AM
- Ed, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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August 31, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Anne-Lise . . . Congratulations on the number two ranking of new poems!! If this poem is not a "7," then I don't know one that is. You work here is simply marvelous. The flow of the words melt -- one by one -- into each successive line leading up to: "In a storm of illusions." I would say in German: "Das ist wirklich fabelhaft!" Cheers, Gary
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 5:51 PM
- Thank you for the beautiful words on my poem, Gary - Highly appreciate your comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bordner Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:32 PM
You make my eyes rain with jewels of love Anne. I'm feelin this deep woman, WOW! May these two bold hearts conquer ill illusions! A FAV. J.A.B. Thank you for sharing is love gem Anne.
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August 31, 2014 at 4:29 AM
- Justin, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Your tender words of romance fall like gentle raindrops on hearts everywhere.
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:47 AM
- Monterey, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chircop Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 6:20 PM
So very beautiful,soft and gentle like the title..So very romantic dear-Charma
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:56 AM
- Charma, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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August 29, 2014 at 2:15 PM
An incredible, romantic write, dear friend. I love the images of seeing the couple in the clouds and the journey "in a storm of illusions." Excellent writing! Love, carolyn
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August 30, 2014 at 4:55 AM
- Carolyn, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Lovely and romantic, Anne Lise!! soft...gentle...peaceful; a 7 rating for you! Have a nice day:) /x/ paul
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August 28, 2014 at 11:06 AM
- Paul, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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August 28, 2014 at 8:56 AM
A lovely picture of warmth of two hearts beautifully adorned. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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August 28, 2014 at 11:06 AM
- Bl, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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August 28, 2014 at 6:54 AM
Hi again. The last line is particularly poignant. All is so orderly and tender, and then in a way that only can be done by a master poet; there is the reference you make to illusions. We are indeed complex creatures and see the world in a jaded way. It is a fun trip. Only a few can break thru the rose colored glasses. You are obviously see things from different dimensions, and that is a huge gift. You must be having an interesting life as a result.
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August 28, 2014 at 7:36 AM
- Dear friend Duke, thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Neels Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 4:37 AM
A beautiful gem Anne Lise, I especially love the ending. Hope you are doing good. xxx
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August 28, 2014 at 4:46 AM
- Wilma, thanks for visiting and nice comments on my poem: - You Touch My Heart So Gently - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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