Seren Roberts Poet Triolet

You Took My Hand

Held out my hand
You took it.
I did not comprehend,
Held out my hand,
Life is one big demand.
Said "Come let us sit",
Held out my hand
You took it.
Wants to be my friend.

Penned 23/07/2014

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 23, 2014 at 8:09 AM Lovely sweet write Seren,, loved it // Seren Roberts July 23, 2014 at 7:23 PM Haven't tried this form before...thank you Seren

Tim Smith July 22, 2014 at 11:56 PM Charming... Short and sweet Seren...hugs Tim Seren Roberts July 23, 2014 at 7:22 PM Thx Tim ...Seren