You Took It All

Holding on to my breath,
Because you took the last away,
You are everything I want,
You know all the things to say.

Holding on to my heart,
Because from me you stole,
You took the beat,
You took it whole.

Holding on to my mind,
Because its full of you,
You took it over,
You are everything I do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 15, 2010 at 1:47 PM
Being let down by a loved one, yet you still feel for him. A scene so out there in todays world >> James
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