You Take My Breath Away

As beautiful as you are
you make the sun cry
when he slips away at sunset,
because he does not want
to share your beauty with
the moon and the stars.

You make the night a joy for me
when you kiss my lips and I
fall fast asleep dreaming…
of your beauty, your kiss, and
your smile and I sleep so
satisfied.

When I rise in the morning
I find the essence of your kiss
is still upon my lips, and I feel
the fire of your love’s desire,
and of the flames that always burn
within you heart.

And you are so wonderful
to be near, very tantalizing
to touch, and so amazing
to know…

For you take my breath away.

Wendell A. Brown,
February 2013,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 23, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Wendell , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)
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February 20, 2013 at 2:40 PM
Nice Poem Wendell
Brown Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:52 PM
Thanks you my brother!
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February 19, 2013 at 1:14 AM
It's more than clear that you're in love and you poetically pass it on to us. Bravo, a beatutiful romantic poem!
Brown Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:51 PM
You made my day Vassillis!
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February 18, 2013 at 7:02 PM
romantic and dreamy at the same time. Congrats on your chosen poem ,Ivy
Brown Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Thank you, Ivy! Blessings!
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February 18, 2013 at 5:07 AM
very affectionate, lovely stuff!
Brown Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Thanks, Nadeem
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