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You Take My Breath Away

As beautiful as you are you make the sun cry when he slips away at sunset, because he does not want to share your beauty with the moon and the stars. You make the night a joy for me when you kiss my lips and I fall fast asleep dreaming… of your beauty, your kiss, and your smile and I sleep so satisfied. When I rise in the morning I find the essence of your kiss is still upon my lips, and I feel the fire of your love’s desire, and of the flames that always burn within you heart. And you are so wonderful to be near, very tantalizing to touch, and so amazing to know… For you take my breath away. Wendell A. Brown, February 2013,

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Date: 2/23/2013 12:27:00 PM
Wendell , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)
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Date: 2/20/2013 2:40:00 PM
Nice Poem Wendell
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Wendell Brown
Date: 4/3/2023 3:52:00 PM
Thanks you my brother!
Date: 2/19/2013 1:14:00 AM
It's more than clear that you're in love and you poetically pass it on to us. Bravo, a beatutiful romantic poem!
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Wendell Brown
Date: 4/3/2023 3:51:00 PM
You made my day Vassillis!
Date: 2/18/2013 7:02:00 PM
romantic and dreamy at the same time. Congrats on your chosen poem ,Ivy
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Wendell Brown
Date: 4/3/2023 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, Ivy! Blessings!
Date: 2/18/2013 5:07:00 AM
very affectionate, lovely stuff!
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Wendell Brown
Date: 4/3/2023 3:53:00 PM
Thanks, Nadeem

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