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You Take my Breath Away

Your smile—my sweetheart, a rising sun, That warms my soul when day’s begun. No words can hold, no art portray, How you take my breath away. A gentle curve, so soft, so bright, It turns my darkness into light. In crowds, it’s all that I can see— A silent spark that sets me free. No storm could steal the calm you bring, No winter chill, no fall of spring. For in that grin, the world stands still, My racing heart bends to your will. I’d trade the stars, the skies above, For just one glance, one smile of love. It’s not just beauty—more than grace— It’s heaven shining through your face. So keep on smiling, come what may, You’ll always take my breath away.

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Date: 6/13/2025 11:35:00 AM
You say it perfectly. Lovely poem.
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Date: 6/10/2025 7:28:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/10/2025 12:19:00 AM
While this one is traditional in form and theme, it’s emotionally resonant, making it feel heartfelt rather than cliché. Love it!
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Date: 6/9/2025 9:43:00 PM
This is such a beautiful portrait of Love in its purest form... thank you for sharing this, I agree with Jacqueline, whoever is receiving this level of love from you is a truly lucky one :)
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Date: 6/3/2025 2:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/1/2025 12:55:00 AM
She's a very lucky lady to have such a beautiful poem written for her. Thank you for sharing. J.
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