You Strolled In

You strolled in smiling like a thousand blooms,
My life-breath forgot to breathe for a while;
Cracked creaked desert-like thousand era dooms,
Gleamed and glowed like the smart summer sun's smile.

Our thoughts, like lilies, immaculate, chaste!
Words and deeds like crystal, vivid and clear;
Sharing and caring, like nectar, we taste!
Like celestials, to no danger, we fear! 

Don't go away from me, my Love! My Life!
Let love last as long as long length could be!
Finding real joy and hope, be our strife, 
Let's stand stern and all changing seasons see!

What if heaven and earth face their fast ends?
Our love for each other to no threat bends!




03 September 2021
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Jayasankar Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 4:28 AM
A beautiful sonnet... so well penned... Have a blessed day Chris... ~ Ani
Alex Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Thank you very much.
Kannan Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Beautiful sonnet... Enjoyed reading it...
Alex Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 12:59 AM
Lovely sonnet
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September 8, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Thank you very much.
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:00 AM
beautiful write
Alex Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Thank you very much.
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September 6, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Thank you very much.
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