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You strolled in smiling like a thousand blooms, My life-breath forgot to breathe for a while; Cracked creaked desert-like thousand era dooms, Gleamed and glowed like the smart summer sun's smile. Our thoughts, like lilies, immaculate, chaste! Words and deeds like crystal, vivid and clear; Sharing and caring, like nectar, we taste! Like celestials, to no danger, we fear! Don't go away from me, my Love! My Life! Let love last as long as long length could be! Finding real joy and hope, be our strife, Let's stand stern and all changing seasons see! What if heaven and earth face their fast ends? Our love for each other to no threat bends! 03 September 2021

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Date: 9/9/2021 4:28:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet... so well penned... Have a blessed day Chris... ~ Ani
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/9/2021 9:51:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/7/2021 3:15:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet... Enjoyed reading it...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/8/2021 8:01:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/6/2021 12:59:00 AM
Lovely sonnet
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/8/2021 7:56:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/4/2021 8:00:00 AM
beautiful write
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/6/2021 3:56:00 AM
Thank you very much.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/6/2021 3:56:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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