You Stand Out

Whispers float, gently across a sunless sky a little note, opens wide these sullen eyes a faint heart beats strong again thinking of not then, but when when we'll be together, as one watching forever, the rising sun skipping rocks and holding hands kicking off shoes, building castles in the sand building a life, turning a house into a home sharing smiles and secrets, never to be alone In a world full of souls, many searching too In a world of diversity, people of many hues filled with choices and beautiful voices taking many a path, a found love rejoices it takes a special heart to stand out to rise above to show me your love there has never been a doubt baby, you stand out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Hi Tim , definitely worth a second read!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:51 AM
So romantic!
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Thanks Richard
Eastman Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Timmy! Timmy! How you do make my little girls's heart a flutter!... No Dragon... I am TOO LITTLE! And sweet... and loveable... And... Now Grandpa Troll is starting to ROFLMAO... Dumb old Troll!
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Lol...thanks Carol
Manassian Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Very beautiful and romantic, Tim. To stand out from a crowd of people is a very special thing. Only love can do that. This is a beautiful piece.
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Thanks Eileen. She definitely stands out.
Chircop Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 4:52 PM
Oh gee, what an amazing beautiful poem this is. Its like a dream come true. Such a romantic soul you are. .This warm loving poem goes to my fvs.
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Thanks Charma. You know I like to dream. My muse is very romantic : )
Ellison Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 4:42 PM
You old romantic devil, Timothy! I feel all warm and fuzzy! Awww! LOL Excellent poem though in all honesty! Kudos!
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Just trying to follow in your footsteps : )
Onclaud Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 1:41 PM
another psalm of affection... a solomon to sheba, tim.. huggs!
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Thank you very much nette
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 12:24 PM
simply delightful Tim you write such amazing romantic poems:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Thanks Jan. You are too kind
Lorenzo Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Love this! My favorite is the last line, but what a build up.
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Thanks Janet
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