Get Your Premium Membership

You Stand Out

Whispers float, gently across a sunless sky a little note, opens wide these sullen eyes a faint heart beats strong again thinking of not then, but when when we'll be together, as one watching forever, the rising sun skipping rocks and holding hands kicking off shoes, building castles in the sand building a life, turning a house into a home sharing smiles and secrets, never to be alone In a world full of souls, many searching too In a world of diversity, people of many hues filled with choices and beautiful voices taking many a path, a found love rejoices it takes a special heart to stand out to rise above to show me your love there has never been a doubt baby, you stand out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/16/2015 6:53:00 PM
Hi Tim , definitely worth a second read!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2015 8:51:00 AM
So romantic!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 8:00:00 PM
Thanks Richard
Date: 8/15/2015 11:44:00 AM
Timmy! Timmy! How you do make my little girls's heart a flutter!... No Dragon... I am TOO LITTLE! And sweet... and loveable... And... Now Grandpa Troll is starting to ROFLMAO... Dumb old Troll!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 8:00:00 PM
Lol...thanks Carol
Date: 8/15/2015 10:30:00 AM
Very beautiful and romantic, Tim. To stand out from a crowd of people is a very special thing. Only love can do that. This is a beautiful piece.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 7:59:00 PM
Thanks Eileen. She definitely stands out.
Date: 8/14/2015 4:52:00 PM
Oh gee, what an amazing beautiful poem this is. Its like a dream come true. Such a romantic soul you are. .This warm loving poem goes to my fvs.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 7:58:00 PM
Thanks Charma. You know I like to dream. My muse is very romantic : )
Date: 8/14/2015 4:42:00 PM
You old romantic devil, Timothy! I feel all warm and fuzzy! Awww! LOL Excellent poem though in all honesty! Kudos!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 7:57:00 PM
Just trying to follow in your footsteps : )
Date: 8/14/2015 1:41:00 PM
another psalm of affection... a solomon to sheba, tim.. huggs!
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 7:57:00 PM
Thank you very much nette
Date: 8/14/2015 12:24:00 PM
simply delightful Tim you write such amazing romantic poems:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 7:56:00 PM
Thanks Jan. You are too kind
Date: 8/14/2015 12:11:00 PM
Love this! My favorite is the last line, but what a build up.
Login to Reply
Smith Avatar
Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2015 7:55:00 PM
Thanks Janet

Book: Shattered Sighs