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You Spoke

I TREMBLED WHEN YOU SAID I'M BEAUTIFUL COULD WE LEAVE THIS PLACE, RUN AWAY... ONLY US FACE TO FACE ASK ME TO SLOWLY KISS AWAY CARESS MY THOUGHTS FRANTIC LOVE EXPLODE BENEATH TWO BODYS A GRINDING SYMPHONY I NEED HIM THIS EMPTY MOMENT RAW RAIN TAKES MY FACE SAD YOUR TIME WITH ME IS GONE PLEASE CRUSH MY ACHE AND AGONY I TREMBLED WHEN YOU SAID I'M BEAUTIFUL

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Nicole Jurgens

Date: 4/1/2010 4:37:00 PM

I think this one is my favorite one of yours sis...you well know I have been through it tooooo many times! haha...I hope I know better by now...but who knows right?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2009 4:00:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jenifer. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Steve Malebranche

Date: 12/6/2009 4:05:00 AM

As a man, i will not lie and say we do have a way of getting what we want so i agree with Caroline but not all men are bad but as Carolyn says we must safeguard our hearts. Wonderful piece.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/6/2009 1:27:00 AM

There is a great deal of passion in this write. The sadness we feel when a relationship ends can cause us to tremble the next time someone says, "You're beautiful." Safeguard your heart, Jenifer, but open it to one who is sincere. Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/5/2009 7:04:00 PM

I can understand. Many men know how to get what they want. A sad poem, but well written. You know, you don't need a man to tell you you are beautiful. You are because you are God's daughter, simple as that. There's someone out there who will love you because of who you are. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.