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You Sitting Next To Me

Ocean waves crash against the seashore you inhale and suddenly you are no more than a hint of spice on a hot summer day Water droplets mingle with the salty smell of the sea, ... you are sitting next to me. Reflections of our yesterdays come together tethering nicely like an old knitted sweater Blanketed moments of us nothing else exists except the salt, the sea, the air we breathe and thoughts of you, sitting next to me. With great density we dip inside the waters of life only to burst forth, almost touching eternity... The shimmering moon bids us hello, leaving behind an endless thrilling after glow. Murmurings from mermaids at sea put us in a drunken state. .. Together drawn to the secrets of the night, we sit side by side watching the deep blue sea I watching you, and you watching me... By: Mystic Rose Oct 14 2024

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Date: 10/16/2024 9:37:00 PM
Wow this is absolutely gorgeous! The way youv painted imagery and how evocative it is truly left me in awe speechless! Definitely a fave for me! Loved it from the very first line till the end! Pleasure reading your work always! Sending you light
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Date: 10/17/2024 6:59:00 PM
Thank you dear Ink, your comment empresses me lo, typo intended, lol, glad you enjoyed !
Date: 10/14/2024 11:37:00 AM
Ahhh Dear Rose, What a wonderful and romantic piece that comes with all the great memories and the old sweater. What isn't there to love! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/14/2024 3:18:00 PM
The weather is cooling here in T O , and its time to cuddle up with some warm memories of love and romance, :)
Date: 10/14/2024 10:55:00 AM
Very romantic poem. Loved it.
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Date: 10/14/2024 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Jay for reading and leaving a comment :)

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