You Simply Threw It Away

In the depths of winter's cold, your smile felt like a warm breeze. And wooing me with finesse, you captured my heart with ease. I thought that you were somehow different from most I knew. And I believed you loved me, for I fell in love with you. You were the source of my strength, the rock upon which I clung. But, like a granite idol's stone heart, the truth was far-flung. You concocted silly stories each time you wanted to stray. And stripping love of value, you simply threw it away. Your lies hammered at my heart breaking it into pieces. And I no longer believe, love irons out the creases. (Quatrain) 9/4/2015
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Date: 3/13/2018 2:50:00 PM
Great poem about love that's untrue. Stings but the sooner that's out of your life the better. Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/13/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/4/2015 2:14:00 PM
Such a heartbreak.....and tinges of betrayal.....breach of trust....very sad write so beautifully written by you dear Emile, i enjoy reading your poems....so well constructed and beautiful imagery...love, Anu:-) a 7!
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Date: 9/4/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Anulaxmi, what a nice thing to say, I appreciate your friendly comments and support. Emile.
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