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You Shall Not Return

(Answer to Claude McKay I shall return) YOU shall not come again You won’t come back You shall not turn up, you shan’t To chuckle and care for the ones you want to see To wristwatch with wonder surprised eyes For the dozy noontime shall be shadowy, And you shall not see the way The forest fires shall have eased off And there shall be mere darkness, grey Grey smoke drifting stagnantly To the blackened grey sky without limit You won’t reach your destination Where many streams loiter without flowing As huge boulders in it are embedded Your dreams shall be unrealized From afar ere you arrive You shall hear the fiddle and fife Of the village of your destination, Eliding desponding delicious tunes That stir to life the secreted depth of native life Of a life of depression, nullity of life Dull melodies of primitive, smart tunes that Shall make you moan, this weak and vicious melodies You shall not return, you shall not return The pain in your heart, the soreness in your soul Cannot be alleviated, you shall expire Before you return your dreams unrealized You shall not return again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/10/2010 5:42:00 AM
The first 3 lines echo my feelings. The mantra which is keepng me sane.The sanity for which I long. Lovely work
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:31:00 AM
Very impressive work in use of metaphoric language..I have not read this author so I have no idea of which you write..Redeye gravy has a distinct flavor..I guess one either likes it or doesn't..I put instant coffee in the hot pan and stir up the pan drippings along with it then add hot water..I let it cook down a little the coffee would taste like some of these coffees that one gets at places like "StarBucks"..A strong flavor with that over roasted taste..It would be considered unhealthy also..S
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:22:00 AM
Honesty Oimbo what a wonderful poem, if I could write just one like that I would be blessed. Please read my latest "Vampires" something along your theme Thanks Jim Gibbons
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:47:00 AM
So very creative. .Celene :)
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:42:00 AM
very beautful! it really touched me.thank you.fabiyas
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:01:00 AM
Hi HONESTY OIMBO. What a well crafted answer to Claude McKay's beautiful work. I must say that I had not read him until now. I've discovered what I've been missing. Thanks for comment on, 'Regrets', and both myself and the good wife are hale and hearty, albeit in the twilight of our day. Thanks for kind words, Eamon
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Date: 10/30/2010 7:50:00 AM
ery creative and interesting write on you shall not return, Honesty
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