You Said

you said to me once - that 
you would let me know - if 
there was anything I could - do
to help

and at the end, lying in that
hospital
all your futures lost to an
unlabeled sickness
all your brilliant pasts
standing in stark relief with
the pain

you must have not thought ...
that I could do anything to
help,

but

you were wrong. you were
you were you were

'cause I could have come to you, 
and held your hand,
and looked into your eyes,

and left with you.

i could have kept you from being
alone

and myself from being left behind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 12:43 PM
enjoyed your poetry Chris, ~luv skat~
Marie Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 9:38 PM
As a person who has been in both places myself, I understand both pains. A moving write, truly.
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May 11, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Such a sad moving write...it touches my heart.Jan
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