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You Revels Through My Veins

A LOVER ASKED HIS BELOVED : ARE YOU STILL READY TO GO THROUGH OUR LOVE ? HIS BELOVED ANSWERED HIM : How can I , not when you are the air that I breath..... How can I not , when you're love is the grace that I seek.... How can I not , when you revels through my veins , you walk through my blood until you reach my heart and then you put your locks on it... How can I not , when we share the same soul , the same heart beat , the same breath and the same passion.... How can I not , when you're the only person who can understand the language of my heart when I get all tongue tight... I never imagined some as half of your perfection , not in my wildest dreams... And now that I have you , now that I can see you , feel you , touch you and your soul - how do you want me to let go of you .... Cause in the end - I can't live with a heart that is missing nor a soul that is lost....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/23/2016 8:06:00 PM
its so beautifully written i love it :)
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/24/2016 12:13:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend and I'm glad you loved it , hugs / / :)
Date: 12/31/2015 8:03:00 PM
The expressions of a loving and wonderful person.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/31/2015 10:44:00 PM
Thank you very much my friend for ur lovely comment...hugs / / :)
Date: 12/30/2015 10:17:00 PM
Very well written and powerful! "when you're the only person who can understand the language of my heart when I get all tongue tight..." Love it... when words fail and they still manage to understand, you know theyre a keeper. : ) Interesting ending too. Great verse! Always, Laura
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/31/2015 12:27:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive words and your pleasant comment , I really do appreciate it happy new year and hugs / / :)
Date: 12/30/2015 6:04:00 PM
how can I not comment, when the poem is so beautiful...a job well done dalia
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/30/2015 6:12:00 PM
Oh my dear , thank u for ur lovely and supporting words it means alot for me....hugs / / :)
Date: 12/29/2015 10:54:00 PM
This poem comes from the very source of pure love itself, with a resolute style of awareness that denies defeat and secures the everlasting passion that is perfect for you and your Beloved my Violet Poetess, "You walk through my blood until you reach my heart and then you put your locks on it..." oh how I know this love domination and love lock woman! J.A.B.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/30/2015 12:08:00 AM
Thank you very much for your sweet words justin , I appreciate your mesmerizing comment , I'm glad u liked it...hugs / / :)

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