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You Ran Away

would his life be the same if he just slept away you should've seen his face in the eyes of sorrow it looked like there was no tomorrow you could've been there for him instead, the lights are turning dim you would've held his broken heart but you ran like a shooting dart now your taking him from the rope he is just hanging there, with no hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/4/2015 8:52:00 PM
ZACHERY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:43:00 PM
Zachary, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/1/2015 1:58:00 PM
- Sad ... but, well written Zachery - A pleasure to read your first poem - Welcome to P-Soup - Happy Easter :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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