You Promised Me: with full song and band audio

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Vs.1) Up again, in the night No sound, no sight Only thoughts endlessly through my mind I see your smile…I see your face And I just can't erase all the plans that we . Made for our lives Chorus) You promised me you said Forever but instead, here I am All alone in the night. Vs.2.) Another day, to get through Without love…without you Just one step at a time…I'll get by But I miss how we'd laugh at the drop of a hat, and I can't even smile anymore. Chorus) You promised me… you said, forever but instead, here I am taking one step at a time Vs.3. I'll be fine, yes I will Cause I have some hope still That one day all the pain will be gone Time heals wounds…or so they say But I just can't see the way My heart will heal without the piece you stole away Chorus) You promised me you said. Forever but instead…here I am… holding the pieces of my heart!

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Tom Woody

Date: 7/28/2025 5:57:00 AM

Whoa! My first impression was Amy Lee. With some electric guitars this could rock but it stands on its own as a powerful ballad. Excellent lyrics Crystol

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2025 6:08:00 AM

Yay!!!! Thank you soooo much Tom! I just posted he will lead me... one of my fav christos lyrics I've written. The song turned out so beautiful! I hope you'll listen. Xoxoxoxo

Tom Woody

Date: 7/28/2025 5:41:00 AM

No audio Crys. I'll check back ...

Tom Woody
Date: 7/28/2025 6:17:00 AM

Ha! Strange comment format below. I wonder what happened? Anyway yes send them the AI version see if they feel it's worthy

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2025 6:14:00 AM

Woody Avatar Tom Woody Date: 7/28/2025 5:58:00 AM Deleteblock poet Oh my gosh I hope they do. It certainly would add authenticity. I can see these AI songs becoming a trend here. I'm going to try to do something with my Song of the Poet... Reply: I think this is a good use for AI... how many of us have the ability or connections to get our song lyrics out to music with a full band and vocals? It's like a song writer giving/selling their lyrics to a producer for a band or singer to record. It's still all my lyrics, just added music and vocal. I think it's wonderful!

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2025 6:09:00 AM

Wow what an honor... I'll send it to them if your sure?! I think they'd love it so much!

Tom Woody
Date: 7/28/2025 6:08:00 AM

PS. If you're cuz is open to it I'd love to hear them do a take on my song Mary Rogers

Tom Woody
Date: 7/28/2025 5:58:00 AM

Oh my gosh I hope they do. It certainly would add authenticity. I can see these AI songs becoming a trend here. I'm going to try to do something with my Song of the Poet

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2025 5:53:00 AM

I'm going to be reposting several lyric poem with audio... like this one. I'm excited to see reactions cause I'm so happy with how they came out! I have a cousin who has a band that plays several venues in New England. She's already asked me to let them sing this and the other song(, I can lie too)!! I hope this is the beginning of one day hearing my songs on the radio! Dream big right? ;)

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/28/2025 5:46:00 AM

Yea took me a minute to download hope you come bk! ;)xo